tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501611235905219648.post6623583743126219119..comments2023-10-20T10:43:45.340-05:00Comments on ChristaCarol Jones: Author, Teacher, Mother: Nano Teaser TuesdayChristaCarol Joneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02908423468344511136noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501611235905219648.post-85589705097918050372009-11-17T21:31:33.019-06:002009-11-17T21:31:33.019-06:00Thanks guys! I guess that means I need to add a te...Thanks guys! I guess that means I need to add a teaser with a direct following to this one. I tend to skip lol. Thanks for all the feedback!ChristaCarol Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02908423468344511136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501611235905219648.post-17521561065031276242009-11-17T18:27:27.795-06:002009-11-17T18:27:27.795-06:00Really good. I really love this character's vo...Really good. I really love this character's voice!Jennifer Walkuphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15441887850464334900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501611235905219648.post-79186573181713006322009-11-17T18:22:40.852-06:002009-11-17T18:22:40.852-06:00Whoa, thats intense, I so want to know whats happe...Whoa, thats intense, I so want to know whats happening...can't wait till next Tuesday!Hayley Lovellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16786674202167099600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501611235905219648.post-12561596715040281852009-11-17T16:04:16.507-06:002009-11-17T16:04:16.507-06:00thanks everyone, and Gretchen, reading it over, I ...thanks everyone, and Gretchen, reading it over, I completely agree. I changed the sentence to just say: No such luck. <br /><br />I'm loving this story, I've been bombarded by a better plot so yay!ChristaCarol Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02908423468344511136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501611235905219648.post-90458698789352617362009-11-17T14:22:29.977-06:002009-11-17T14:22:29.977-06:00You have some interesting metaphors 'mind buzz...You have some interesting metaphors 'mind buzzing like a bus accident'.<br />Intriguing scene, definitely creepy and I'm definitely up for reading some moer!sue laybournhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14549268075528924978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501611235905219648.post-20204648243213777202009-11-17T13:48:20.676-06:002009-11-17T13:48:20.676-06:00Great tension. I enjoyed the way you showed her u...Great tension. I enjoyed the way you showed her unwillingness to accept the reality of the situation. Very gripping.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501611235905219648.post-43193888868845984642009-11-17T12:29:50.346-06:002009-11-17T12:29:50.346-06:00Its a significantly creepy scene! I stumbled over...Its a significantly creepy scene! I stumbled over a few of the turns of phrase (like "they remained in slumber") that just felt a little too, I don't, anachronistic and out of character.<br /><br />Other than that, I was totally interested!Gretchenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09327185025020171674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501611235905219648.post-82585005182000359052009-11-17T11:35:49.199-06:002009-11-17T11:35:49.199-06:00Love. This. Story.
More, more! Dang, this is awes...Love. This. Story.<br /><br />More, more! Dang, this is awesome.Sara Raaschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01196505323463444186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501611235905219648.post-47181101607741560342009-11-17T10:24:13.953-06:002009-11-17T10:24:13.953-06:00Hah! Awesome, I'm glad the "creepiness&qu...Hah! Awesome, I'm glad the "creepiness" is a win. Thanks guys!ChristaCarol Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02908423468344511136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501611235905219648.post-13347289907846916792009-11-17T09:42:03.934-06:002009-11-17T09:42:03.934-06:00Tooo short!!!! and very creepy! Love the flight o...Tooo short!!!! and very creepy! Love the flight or fight dilemma and I wanna know what's gonna happen next!J.F. Posthumushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17033765098660171013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501611235905219648.post-56174391082933690692009-11-17T09:30:31.762-06:002009-11-17T09:30:31.762-06:00Nice and creepy! I really like the way you describ...Nice and creepy! I really like the way you describe her denial. Awesome scene!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6501611235905219648.post-79285328019475913682009-11-17T08:40:46.757-06:002009-11-17T08:40:46.757-06:00Oooh, Christa, very creepy! You did a great job wi...Oooh, Christa, very creepy! You did a great job with this scene.sunnahttp://amybai.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com